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Mock News Conference
You've spent some time examining a hard news story, now it's time to go through the process of reporting and writing one. This involves asking good questions, taking detailed notes, and writing in journalistic style. We will discuss what you'll need to get from the interview before we begin the news conference.
Today's Agenda
First, I will collect your story idea sheets and show you how to post your hard news analysis. We'll also review some of your answers.
After this, I will set you up with one more internet tool. Diigo is a social bookmarking tool. You will use it to bookmark news stories on a weekly basis and save research for group projects. I will provide you with your login and password. Please write them down in a place where you can find them easily. This week we will be focusing on writing hard news. To practice doing this, we will be holding a news conference on a mock hostage crisis here at the school. Please read this scenario and develop ten questions for tomorrow's news conference. You will be reporting on and writing a hard news story of your own next week. You can get started on the reporting process as soon as you like, or you can attend the next Board of Education meeting (Tuesday, February 16 at 7:00 p.m. in the IMC) where you'll find the material for at least one hard news story. We'll discuss some other options if you can't make this meeting.
Objective: Students will be able to identify the structure and function of a hard news story.
Hard News Analysis
We will finish up our discussion of story ideas by looking at other sources you (or any journalists) might use to generate ideas. After discussing this, we'll move on to setting up your new weblogs.
![]() Next, we will become familiar with the structure of a hard news story (inverted pyramid style). This is a very structured way of writing which you will begin to employ next week. Please use the material from the handout "The Elements of the Basic News Story" to analyze the structure of the following hard news story by answering the questions in red. Be sure to use information from the handout to support your answers (don't just tell me what you think). You can either do this in a post on your weblog, or in MS Word. If you do it in Word, I'll show you how to upload it and post it on Monday. You can copy and paste the whole story into your post or document or just copy and paste the questions (in red) and answer them. It's up to you. Whatever you don't finish is homework.
Monica Massaro was found stabbed to death at 79 Main St. on Monday. Her killer remained at large yesterday; police haven't said if they have any suspects in mind. What element of the basic news story does this fulfill (lead,backup,nut graph,lead quote, impact, attribution,background, elaboration)? What is the most important question left unanswered? Residents believe Ms. Massaro, who was single, lived alone in her half of the duplex and ran a home cleaning business. She had formerly worked as a mortgage broker. But, according to her MySpace Web page, her life centered upon Rock 'n' Roll and attending concerts.
He said he had no previous indication of any trouble at the house. He last saw Ms. Massaro a few weeks ago as he was shuttling papers along Main Street from his home to the borough's offices. He saw her on her porch and "we had a chat," he said. "She seemed happy." He described residents as "pretty shaken up" in the wake of the murder. As of yesterday morning, State Police would give only the victim's name, age, address and that it was murder. Employees of European Country Kitchens on North Street said they found materials identifying the victim behind their building at about 9 a.m. Monday and took the papers inside. An office employee made seven calls to her residence during the day, but no one answered. Then late in the day, an employee knocked on both doors of the duplex. When again there was no response, the worker called the State Police at about 5:30 p.m. That led to the grisly discovery. European Country Kitchens is across the street from a large parking lot that connects to the victim's back yard. Her identification was found behind the North Street building that also houses Peer and Picone Woodworking and Gotahaus. Railroad tracks run behind the property. What basic question (5W and H) do the previous two paragraphs answer? On Tuesday morning, state troopers and vehicles were stationed at both ends of the Main Street block between East and Gardner streets, refusing to let non-residents enter. The entire lot around the victim's residence was cordoned off in yellow crime-scene tape.
Cornel Plebani, a retired state trooper, has lived on North Street for six years, about 100 yards from the victim's home. His residence also borders the parking lot. Police asked him if he had seen or heard anything unusual, but he knew nothing. When they told him that his neighbor was brutally murdered with her throat cut, he was shocked. "It surprised the hell out of me," said Mr. Plebani. "This is the quietest neighborhood you've ever seen." Why was this quote included? What does it add to the story? He did not know the woman, but heard from neighbors that "she was a nice lady." Many in the neighborhood were anxious as they waited to hear more information. "This kind of stuff doesn't happen here," said Diane Crisman-Race of Brunswick Avenue, a former Borough Council member. She said that after learning of the murder a couple of her neighbors reported hearing their doorknobs jiggled on Saturday night, but that she didn't hear anything.
The murder was the topic of discussion at Mark Koppe's General Store on Church Street as area residents and workers came in for lunch. Employees and customers alike speculated about whether the victim was a cleaning woman who was a frequent customer. They didn't know the customer's name. They also worried about the safety of the small town where many residents don't lock their doors. They wondered why they hadn't heard anything on the news or from police as they stood in line ordering sandwiches. The previous four paragraphs are all examples of what element of the basic news story? What effect do they have on the reader? Bob Warner has lived in the borough since 1939. The only violent crime he remembers is a murder "at the truck stop years ago." In 1991, serial killer John Fautenberry shot to death a Tennessee truck driver at the Pilot truck stop on Route 173. He was given a life sentence for the murder. What element of the basic news story does this paragraph fulfill (lead,backup,nut graph,lead quote, impact, attribution,background, elaboration)? Sgt. Jeanne Hengemuhl, a spokeswoman for the State Police, said the victim's body was taken to the regional medical examiner's office in Newark for an autopsy on Tuesday. The results were not immediately released. Is this an effective ending (according to the textbook)? Why or why not?
Whatever you don't get finished will become homework. You will be writing a hard news story very soon, so it's important that you become familiar with this style.
Objective: Students will be able to identify the structure and function of a hard news story.
More Story Ideas
Yesterday, we worked with how editors decide what is most newsworthy for their audience, but they are not the only ones who determine the news. Good reporters are constantly in search of their next story. As I mentioned yesterday, this will be an ongoing requirement for this class. Each week, you will be responsible for coming up with four story ideas. For each of these ideas, you need to list five sources, and five questions the story will answer for the reader. The first set of these will be due on Monday.
To demonstrate how you can find stories all around you, we will take a brief tour of the campus and complete a story idea scavenger hunt.
Homework:
Objectives: Students will be able to respond to the needs of an audience by applying news qualities in their choice of story topics.
What is News?
We will spend part of the block today getting you set up for an internet based tool called a news aggregator. These gather news articles for you from a particular site, section, or even on a chosen topic. They will be particular useful for generating story ideas, but also for following top stories posted to sites like CNN, MSNBC, and The Hunterdon County Democrat and the Star Ledger for news quizzes.
Once everything is set up we will discuss what makes a story newsworthy. What are some of the guidelines and terminology editors use to help them decide what goes in the paper and what goes on the front page? After this, we will talk about why certain publications contain different "top stories." Why you chose the story that you did, and how you would determine what would be the top stories for The Lamp (our school community's newspaper)? If we have time, we will complete an online simulation that requires you to use the qualites of news as a guideline to make the decisions editors make everyday. Homework: Keep up with the news there will be a quiz soon!
Welcome Journalism 1
"The universe is made up of stories not atoms." - Muriel Rukeyser
"Journalism is the first rough draft of history" - unknown "The smarter the journalists are the better off society is. [For] to a degree, people read the press to inform themselves - and the better the teacher, the better the student body." - Warren Buffett
I hope that by the end of this block you have a clear idea about what to expect, and what will be expected of you, in this class.
Assignment: Find a newspaper article (either in print or online) that you find newsworthy.
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News SourcesTeen and School PapersPaly Voice-Palo Alto (CA) Newspaper HS newspaperCarmel (IN) HS Newspaper-an award winning HS newspaper Silver Chips- award winning online newspaper of Montgomery Blair High School (MD) The Lion's Roar Online newspaper of Newton South High School (MA) The Feather Online newspaper Fresno Christian High School (CA) The Rampage Online newspaper of Rockville H.S. (MD) The Outlook Online Newspaper of Oakton H.S. (Vienna, VA) The Falcon Online Newspaper of Saratoga H.S. (CA) The Spoke Online Newspaper of Connestoga H.S. (Berwyn, PA) Student Press Online Newspaper of Wayland H.S. (MA) My High School Journalism The national edition of ASNE's online high school news hosting service. It posts stories from high schools that use its service. The Paper Trail U.S. News & World Report's compilation of stories from college news papers LA Youth- a teen newspaper that publishes first hand accounts and investigative pieces on topics that affect thier readers The Mash - online newspaper of high schools in Chicago. Professional News SourcesNew York TimesCNN The Washington Post The Philadelphia Inquirer GoogleNews LATimes National Public Radio Christian Science Monitor-contains some excellent feature stories Local News-from Star Ledger, Democrat, and others Courier News-more local news Newslink-Links to newspapers, magazines, TV and Radio worldwide JournalismNet-worldwide news searching tool Topix-a great tool for gathering news on a vareity of beats The Week in Pictures The best in photojournalism from MSNBC. GSSPA Blog Join the discussion about NJ student newspapers. ResourcesEducation News-Issues and trends affecting schools. These can be a good source for story ideasJournalist's Toolbox-a great all around journalism resource Poynter Online-a great all around journalism resource Weblines-NY Times online textbook on high school news writing Poynter's High School J Guide-a frequently updated guide dealing with topics relevant to high school journalists Facsnet-nice source for beats and analysis of current events Interviews-articles on the art of interviewing NYT WebGuide-link to Internet tools for Journalists Al's Morning Meeting-weekly story idea help from the Poynter Institute HandoutsCourse DescriptionStory Idea Sheet Writing Leads Story Rubric View My Stats
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